was this it then?
a shudder
and a cellphone sort of disintegrating
at the bottom of the ocean?
little plaques with dashes, commas, semicolons..
and a tear stain..?
no make ups or do overs?
or round the ways again?
just a 30 second stroke of genius
where “oh” meets “very well then..”
– Sheila C.
sheila sea 
Very nice! *Snaps*
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Those last two lines really bring it all home. Well done!
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Very nice.
Thanks!
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brillaint!
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This is why you’re a favorite poet of mine whose work I love to read: multi-layered with many possible interpretations (end of the world, end of a relationship, et. al.) and simple, yet complex. I very much like the dialogue included.
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Sometimes I like your work because I don’t know what the hell you are talking about.
I like to make people wonder too. 😉
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hahahaha, I enjoy that. Though I should try to be more clear!
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Brilliant. Stroke of genius is when you put words on paper. God, I love reading your work.
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I’m honored you feel that way.. Humbled, truly. Thank you.
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Very good
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Thank you.
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Hey, I haven’t been here in a while but you haven’t lost you touch. I came to tell you I nominated you for the Entertainer Blogger Award. Have a nice day.
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