at least I know
that some day-
maybe tomorrow,
when I’m standing
in line at the bank
or in my car
headed home
frustrated at gridlock
counting black car tops
and cursing idiot drivers
atleast I know
that if a clot
makes it way
up my right arm
at just the right moment
when my blood pumps just so
amidst bobbing and weaving
and reading traffic signs
in blurred snow
at least I know
that when the pain
bears down
and the shock comes
and goes
at least I know
it’ll be your voice
and your grip
in the throes
as the neurons stop firing
and the hallucinations take hold
at least I know
it’ll be with you,
darling
that I’ll leave a part
and the whole
of my soul.
– sc
we take comfort in the hope that our final breaths will find us reuniting with loved ones…I enjoyed this…
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Its deep! They say your whole life flashes in front of your eyes when you are taking your final breaths.. And the person who is in the most of the slides is our soulmate.
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Yeah I’ve heard this! It’s so bittersweet to think about. Tragic, really.
Thank you for stopping by! 🙂
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Ah! Lovely 😊
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Suggestions?
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Yes, I’d love some!
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A very nice juxtapositioning of the everday mundane frustrations of life with the sudden and (also mundane) ending of it. Not a clog but a clot is what you want to use here. Did you already edit since I read it? That was the only change.
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Yes! That’s exactly what I meant. Thank you. Sometimes I type faster than I think. 🙂
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seriously, the rhythm in this one is amazing 🙂 Thanks for the follow 😉
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Thank you, that’s very kind. 🙂
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Welcome
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stunning.
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Thank you!
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love this!
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Love it!
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Thank you!
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This is stunning and I love the description. The details you create are beautiful, sad, but honest. Great piece!
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Thank you so much! I’m trying to strip down my writing so it really means a lot that you enjoyed it. 💜
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Such wonderful lines. 😊
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Thank you. 😊💜
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Very catching
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Wow, amazing.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Vivid imagery! Love this. Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Happy to share, I’m glad you loved it. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Very nice poem. Thank you.
Tony R
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Dear Sheila,
Thanks for stop over and liking my work, and because of such nice gesture I got to know that there is such nice and beautiful blog like yours is available.
I like your writing style, your work is really worth to appreciate and follow.
Keep blogging and keep enriching blogger community by your unique ideas.
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Thank you so much. Those are some of the kindest words anyone has written to me in the blogger community. I really appreciate it.. It motivates me to keep sharing. Thanks a lot, Abhishek. 🙂
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