your worst fear has come true
you are a creaking ceiling fan
you are an untuned grand piano
you are a Van Gogh in a vault
you are an afterthought
a word,
I forgot.
– sc
your worst fear has come true
you are a creaking ceiling fan
you are an untuned grand piano
you are a Van Gogh in a vault
you are an afterthought
a word,
I forgot.
– sc
So well put! I love this one.
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Thank you, I’m really glad you liked it. π
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Certainly a good and true poem.
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Powerful!
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thank you. π
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Nicely written!
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Thank you! π
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buffering words
with
bullet and
beauty
π
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oh, aww, that’s lovely.. thank you. π
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Ouch! π
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Haha, this is why they say “don’t date writers”.
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Oh Wowza, “VanGogh in a vault” really sums it up! Well done!!
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Thank you, I’m particularly proud of that line. π
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Got attitude. Nice!
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Haha, a little bark for the bite. π
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beautiful poem.
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Thank you. π
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Metaphorical!
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Thank youu β€
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I’ve read most of your creations and I have to say they are really nice.Love this!You’re truly talented.
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That means so much to me. Thank you, really, much obliged. I’m grateful that you think so and that took the time to let me know.
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Beautifully disparaging.
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That’s a lovely way to put it. Thank you for the compliment.
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Love this. Challenging and confronting all at once…Challenge to be more and confrontational in complacency.
Ps. Thanks for the follow! π
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Thanks for the follow back. I’m glad you stopped by. I’ve been trying to be more direct. I thikn it worked this time π
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π
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I’m so glad you chose to follow my blog because it lead me here and these words are so precise to how I feel presently. Thank you. I’d like to reblog this π
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I’m so happy this resonated! I was happy to follow, please reblog at your leisure. π
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Great, I will!
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Reblogged this on Among other things, J.
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I’ve read and reread this so many times. Really powerful. Love your stuff!
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The rhyme.
The meaning!
Fits like a puzzle piece.
Love it. #TheCheesyOne
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Lovely poem, Sheila. Well done!
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