the sun soaked ripe salvia
the age burnt red brick floor
the fading blue chipped walls
the cruel way I’ve wasted so much time
-SC
the sun soaked ripe salvia
the age burnt red brick floor
the fading blue chipped walls
the cruel way I’ve wasted so much time
-SC
sheila sea 
Very succinct and powerful, I latched on to it immediately and let it haunt me as I walked with it. Peace, Harlon
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Thank you, Harlon. That’s great. I’m glad it had that depth and effect for you. I especially appreciate it coming from a writer I admire. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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It’s lovely work, you’re capturing a melancholy sensuality here.
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thank you. 🙂
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the language here is lovely; brilliant word choices.
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Much obliged. Thank you. 🙂
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So few words. So rich. Nothing more needed. Thank you.
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Thank you for your kind comments, Niklas. I’m glad you’re enjoying my poetry. 🙂
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