there’s a flimsy wooden shelf
in your room.
a red physics book
with thick black lettering
lies on it.
to the left
a compendium of
western colonization
after 1682.
to the right
a set of Bose speakers
that often throb
Bach and Mozart-
(Wu Tang though
when I come
through)
beside it a badge with
your name raised
and your smile
carrying that certain
dim view.
a plastic model of
a rocket-
obscenely smooth,
and phallic
along with your “bright idea”
board.
(a haphazard collection of
nuances scrawled on it)
and in the corner
tucked
behind the board is a
printed photograph.
a memory of
long dead past
where we were
unknowingly clasped
with bliss plastered
across.
And I have to laugh
because
who would’ve guessed
the barely hanging
shelf would outlast
us.
– SC
A surprise ending…very good…
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I love that ending. Such innocent scenes harbor the triggers to memories that change our quiet reflection into a raging storm. Well done!
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Simple objects triggering powerful emotions. That is a poetic device I enjoy using. See my recent poem Voices: http://rabbitlaneutah.com/2015/02/10/voices/. Thanks.
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I love the story! So originally told …
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I am such a fan of your writing – it’s such a beautiful blend of humility and sensuality. Yay! XO Harlon
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Thank you so much, it’s really lovely to hear that.
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Good write 🙂
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awesome….perfect narration
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very nice 🙂 thank you for sharing!
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Absolutely beautiful. The form works really well with the rhyming pattern and flow of this poem.
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Maybe we should be cautious about the monuments we erect, but we mean it in the moment and so it’s real enough.
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I loved it! Especially the ending… It comes together beautifully😀
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This is so good! it tells such a sad but beautiful story. The details in the poem are perfect! I love it!
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Yes! So well woven. And incredibly vivid, I can see the room. You write beautifully.
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Did it work out with them in the end?
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with who?
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Owner of the shelf
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haha he doesn’t exist 😉
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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