there’s a scar at the edge
of your eyebrow
where your forehead
starts to curve
right where strands
of dark hair fall like
silk curtains.
I like to follow it
drawing lines across
your face
down
to the corners of your lips.
their movements make me anxious,
so I focus on the scar.
the little ridges it makes
when you squint to focus
remind me that you
and I are so alike.
it’s easy to forget since
I’m thick golden brown
and you’re pale milk cream
save the marred bit
near your crease.
you told me
you had fallen-
a tree, I think.
maybe a bike?
either way
our culpability
is questionable
but our awkward grace
is undeniable.
and I find myself in that.
we are tectonic plates
drifting into
each other,
fitting together,
forcibly and inevitably
ever so slowly.
like the ridges in a scar
worn down into skin with time.
– Sheila Sea
Wonderful focus on a detail, a scar, from which the relationship is meaningfully unfolded. Bravo.
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thank you, much obliged. ^_^
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Very nice. Good inclusion of the senses, very textual. Well done.
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Thank you, thank you. Honestly I was apprehensive to post, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I was floating with your words. XO H
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Perfect. ^_^
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So personal, beautiful representation of your relationship. Love it.
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That’s lovely to hear, thanks doll. 💜
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This is wonderful. I love how detailed it is.
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Thank you! ^_^
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Woah! How does one relate a scar to a relationship, but you did it very well. Nice work!
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Thank you. ^_^
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Love the connection you created and using a scar was very clever. 😀
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Thank you, it’s an odd favorite for sure. ☺️
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I love the rhythm of this poem. It felt like I was being held and rocked to sleep by the ocean.
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That’s beautiful. I’m so glad to hear it.. 😀
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“we are tectonic plates drifting into each other” … love that wording.
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Thank you. Glad to hear it. ^_^
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I love this Sheila Sea. I’m not sure why, but I do. And that’s what love is all about isn’t it?
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I have nominated you for the Sisterhood of the World Bloggers Award! Please find the details in my most recent post: https://apoetic1.wordpress.com/2015/02/08/sisterhood-of-the-world-bloggers-award-thanks-karuna/.
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Powerful and rich.
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Love the imagery. Especially the last eight lines. Very effective!
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Lovely tone here. A beautiful tying in of an individual to the larger forces of the earth with the tectonic plate simile.
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Thank you. I’m especially proud of that part. ^_^ please stop by again.
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Wonderful poem, truly
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Thank you for following me back, I love your poetry!
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Thank you, I love hearing it. 💜💐
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I nominated you for the Sisterhood of the World Bloggers Award! 😀
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Reblogged this on PotsandPoetry.
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I love the order in which you introduce your imagery into the reality you see. Lovely work.
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Your words produce a strong visual experience. Nice!
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Beautifully written… the attention to detail is superb 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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