I suppose I could settle
in the embrace
of this plateau.
I suppose I could stop
jolting about-
striking hard
the way I often do.
I suppose I could hold myself
to standards
that beguile you-
murmuring my own highs to sleep.
and yeah,
I suppose I flit around
too often
and rummage too deep
and I suppose
I could loosen the grip
and bury myself in
or teeter on a steep.
I suppose I could even strip
all the matted and wild
and lend myself to query
and quarry.
I suppose I could..
but the dusk is set.
and my lightness is so bereft
of you and of could
that it is sudden and clear
that a lover should become
a loved and a loved
should become just
another,
as in
some other- .
my dear.
– Sheila Sea
Damn.. Love love this
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Thanks hun. ^_^
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simply loved it
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Thank you! π
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Beautiful π
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Sad, however may this desire a wish out of life….
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clever. honest. lovely, “of you and of could..
it is sudden and clear” <– digging this and understood.
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Thank you! I just made some adjustments but I like the rhythm in there too. π
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This is great! I wish I could write like you!
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The rhythm evokes a resignation… and yeah, it shouldn’t be so difficult. Shouldn’t cost so much. Good one, thanks.
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I can’t tell you how much I look forward to reading your poetry. You’re a beautiful writer. π
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Oh wow, I’m absolutely honored.. Thank you so much. You’ve really made my day. π
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Good one.
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The “work” of a relation ship going into dry dock nicely penned.
Best lines for me:
“how a lover
should become
a once loved
and a once loved
should simply
become just
some other.”
Unlike Mahalramos, didn’t quite understand “βof you and of could..” But I’m a guy, so I’ll chalk it up to that. But it fits in the pattern.
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lmao.. oh there you are!
how do you know I’m not a guy, huh?
To explain the line is:
“and my lightness is so bereft
of you and of could”
I’m unloading. I am bereft of the person and “the could’ve been”. I like playing with words. Does that make sense?
Glad you liked it, always a pleasure to hear from you! π
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How do you know I’m not a female? Thanks for the explanation.
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I love this!
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Thank you! βΊοΈβΊοΈ
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Thanks for sharing a beautiful experience of you.
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I found this very cute π awesome lines
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smart and relatable…great work π
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Thank you! π
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You’re welcome π
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This is interesting prose – I think I may be in that predicament right now.
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Excellent.
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This has a nice tone to it.
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So flowing and clear! Love this π
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Good write … liked it.
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do you perform spoken word?(i had to ask)
if not you should think about it the rawness in the material demands to jump of the paper(or screen in my case) and come alive.I probably can’t but i would love to hear you perform your stuff.
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I’ve been thinking about it actually! I don’t know if I’d be any good, I’m terrified of public speech, haha. I’ve been trying to gather courage for a while.
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i see you’re bespectacled like me do that trick where you don’t wear your spectacles so you don’t get i wind of the crowd’s reaction.As long as you’re in that poetry corner just you and the words the crowd will absolutely love it.Of that i am certain.
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That’s really kind of you to say. Thank you for your positive encouragement. I’ll keep your words in mind. π
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Fantastic! What an original and rhythmic poem-especially the “I suppose” epistrophe. Thanks for the follow-I follow back. Am looking forward to reading more of your work. I agree about hearing you speak.
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Thanks for taking time away from writing your clever poems to visit my blog!
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Love this
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