temperate and separate
we were doomed from
lethargic start.
sluggish and passive
in our contact
we were carved to part.
and I knew
in my willed impatience
that I’d push away your
savage lateness.
because reason
cannot live with zeal
and sound mind
cannot harbor lark.
– Sheila Sea
Hark! This is really very good. Hark Hark. In fact, wonderful.
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haha thanks, Doug.
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Beautiful
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Thank you. βΊοΈ
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‘sound mind/cannot harbour lark” – quite Dickinsonian. Happy New Year- we’ll be back to see what you’re up to.
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Oh my, thank you.. That’s an honorable comparasion.
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This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank you. π
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Gorgeous Writing
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Thank you. βΊοΈ
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Life is a play, and mind is the play-maker. A good composition π
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hmm, good words that might serve for inspiration.. thanks. π
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Love this…
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Amazing! I love reading your poems
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Thank you so much! I love that you enjoy them. π
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Beautiful :’)
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Thank you βΊοΈβΊοΈ
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Your welcome π
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You write so beautifully. Free flowing thoughts. π
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Thank you. ^_^
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Thank you to like my poetry. Hope you enjoy it π
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Reminds me of this:
“Sonnet XXIX”
by William Shakespeare
When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes,
I all alone beweep my outcast state
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries
And look upon myself and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featur’d like him, like him with friends possess’d,
Desiring this man’s art and that man’s scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven’s gate;
For thy sweet love remember’d such wealth brings
That then I scorn to change my state with kings.
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*HEAD EXPLODES* THIS WAS AWESOME!
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haha thanks. π
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