I saw you at the edge of the yard
outstretched and pulling
from the just-moist soil.
the sun in my eyes
was a small price
to watch your figure
curve & sway.
and my goodness,
is there anything lovelier
than your sweat drenched brow?
I could watch the droplets caress
your jaw for the rest of my days.
I could cease to exist
in the crook of your shoulder
& the crease of your mouth
which incidentally–
hints at your being molded
from fresh clay.
as such,
I know this will not last ..
so I will memorize your gaze
and as we are lost to the dark
I will cling to this loving haze
and universe willing, as the worlds
implode around me
I will sense-
even a flicker
of your once lived
luminous & sun soaked
sways.
– Sheila Sea
beautiful!
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Perfect choice of words. π
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Thank you! π
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Beautiful poem.
Thank you for the follow too, much appreciated x
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Thank you! Happy read a fellow writer. βΊοΈ
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thanks so much for visiting my blog…this poem is so lovely, that last stanza…wow!! I have another blog you might find interesting…erotic poems, poetry of all sorts http://tracesofthesoul.wordpress.com
I love “memorize your gaze”…just wow!
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haha thank you so much! I love erotic writing, I will DEFINITELY check it out. π
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So glad you stopped by my blog…your writing is beautiful. I look forward to reading more. π
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoy it, the pleasure is all mine. π
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Nice piece flow n tone i like the universe willing line and the images throughout read it twice
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oh my! Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it. π
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Beautiful words in the context of love.
Glad you stumbled upon my crazy little blog, looking forward to reading more in the future.
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Thanks Charly! I enjoy your writing as well. I look forward to reading you too. π
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Lovely poem.
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Thanks love! π
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So beautiful ! I could see everything from your eyes in the poem. It was very sensual.
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Thanks hun, I’m glad you think so! β€
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Evocative poetry. Great stuff!
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Thank you so much! βΊοΈ
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What an intensely sensual, vibrant poem! As I’ve traveled through the years I learn more and more that the wonderful feelings mother nature tickles us with during courtship have nothing to do with love. Although when I was young and guilty of believing it myself, I find so many young poets today interfusing the two as though they were the same. They’re not. Love is only born through the waning of those magical feelings you described so beautifully above. And frankly I’m not entirely certain that love itself is a feeling at all, but much more of an entity itself – to be nurtured and taken care of – such as a puppy. Love is not a feeling – but rather a protector of our feelings. It is the initiator, the driving force behind our actions to protect our feelings. If I could impart anything to other young poets it would be to never confuse the two – and always understand that sexual attraction is the greater emotional part between them. (As your lovely poem absolutely proves.) Thank you for not destroying it with the concept of love –
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I like how you find love in the big details and the small. Nice!
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Thank you! π
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Honest, raw and gorgeous.
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Thank you so much!βΊοΈ
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This is lovely. Light and with a clear air.
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Oh gosh, thank you. I’m glad you enkoyed it. π
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this is really sweet
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I’m glad you liked you liked it, hun. π
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Your poems are beautiful. Thank you for following my blog.
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Thanks Margeaux, you have a lovely name.. I look forward to reading your blog. ^_^
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mi tre Δuas vian bele sent plena poemo
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Uhh huuuhhhh…
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Visually right on !
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Right on, your poetry is so fresh and vibrant! Really digging the vibes on everything I’ve read so far. Thanks for the follow!
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. π
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