if a gasp can be measured with punctuation
I suppose my nuances can be read
if every word can drip with guidance
I lament your silence is soaking wet
“it is simple and it need not be said”
we linger at an impasse
and
only nothing
only space
only a blinking bar
and
only a period
can lay us
abruptly
and
finally, abed.
– Sheila Sea
whoa, girl!
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haha thanks Mickey! ☺️☺️
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Reblogged this on multiplemichael.
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well this is fantastic. “I lament your silence is soaking wet” Wonderful line, wonderful poem.
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I am blushing, thank you Meagan! I’m glad you liked you liked it.
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beautiful.
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Sheila, you have a gift with words!
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aww thabk you! how kind!
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Excellent
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*blushes* thank uuuu
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Aww you know you BAD! 😎
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haha not at all but I’m grateful people think so. 🙂
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The silence you describe can sometimes be the most uncomfortable silence ever. That impasse is always so awkward. But I liked this. It was crisp, and very appropriate for me, given my work day. Thanks!
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Thank you, I’m really glad it spoke to you. 💜
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You write beautifully. The last stanza can’t get over it. 🙂 You have a gift ❤
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My goodness, thank you, Julia. You’ve made my day. ❤
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I’m going to ask a crazy question: would you ever like to collaborate on a poem with me? 🙂 (okay, it’s not that crazy, haha.) and you’re welcome ❤
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I would absolutely love to, yes! Email me so we can chat, please. 🙂 sheilaseapoetry@gmail.com
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okay! 🙂
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Excellent.
Puns wetly with menses too!
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Seriously dangerous Gravatar you have there, Sheila.
Forgive us men for any distraction.
I’m off, before I make even more of a boob of myself.
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Hi Sheila. You have an amazing way of making the words flow and want me to read more. Thank you so much for calling by and liking my poem ‘ Helicopter!’ And wanting to follow my poetry adventures. Peace and Good Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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I like your poetry. Thanks for the like!
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Beautifully done. And thanks for visiting my blog!
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Thanks for the follow, i followed back and “Whoa!!! – this poem is outta this place”
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haha thanks for checking it out. 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Eric. 🙂
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Very nice!!
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Perfectly crafted.
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This is quite excellent! ^-^
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i love it…nice and raw
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Its like you read my mind! You appear to know so much about this,
like you wrote the book in it or something. I think that you can do with some pics to drive the message home a bit, but other than that, this is great
blog. A great read. I’ll definitely be back.
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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! Thanks for following my blog 🙂
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